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    dots Submission Name: Losing Faithdots
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    Author: DarkAngel1993
    ASL Info:    13/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/1/17
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsLosing Faithdots
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    Slender beams of moonlight enter
    this darkened hall as I kneel,
    always alone, always fearful,
    frozen here,
    waiting.

    Accusing forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
    dust dances in the air,
    forming an image in my mind,
    reaving my darkened flesh.

    Pain on an angel's face.

    I raise my head, now crying out for
    this uncaring darkness.




    Submitted on 2006-09-08 21:15:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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