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    dots Submission Name: Promisedots
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    Author: BigRed
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 49/52/37
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 414



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    dotsPromisedots
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    I will promise you
    And of these words I'll keep
    Every word that leaves my lips
    Even as I hold you when you sleep.
    Not one word is empty
    And every word is true.
    I will always be there.
    This I promise you.
    When you have that feeling
    That lonliness might linger.
    Look at the spaces above your palm
    And there you'll see my fingers.




    Submitted on 2006-09-08 21:32:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi, very dreamy, all so sadly lost with age. poe
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Good work. The idea is painted perfectly. The joined hands part is the most touching.
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem, I can feel the passion in the words.
    I can even see you holding hands & looking in someone's eye when you say this.
    I like it. Keep'em coming.
    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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