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    dots Submission Name: A Winning Streakdots
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    Author: DeadGod
    ASL Info:    20/M/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 61/103/31
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 99
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1110



    Description:
       This is about someone who is "just a friend." But she means the universe.


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    dotsA Winning Streakdots
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    Kicked back: The shot of Everclear.
    A smile: Like something's on your mind.
    A question: Have you come to find
    The meaning of our scheming, dear?
    The rules are simple to the game:
    Don't need, don't lust- the rest is fine.
    But simply wink, and say my name.
    And you will beat me every time.

    Your cuts are clear. They realize
    That we and they are not the same;
    But if you let me love your pain,
    I'll hide it from their probing eyes.
    Come dance with me, devoid of light,
    And know me, with your eyes divine;
    Then you may have my soul tonight,
    And you will beat me every time.

    So tell me, darling, which is worst:
    The dream, the dreamer, or the sleep?
    Please save the dreams I couldn't keep.
    Please heed my secrets, trapped in verse.
    Your knuckles white, your will is set.
    You draw the Devil (death defined.)
    I'll say a prayer and place my bet,
    But you will beat me every time.




    Submitted on 2006-09-09 01:36:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A winning one, I like it. Nice rhymes, good choice of words.

    Grtz,
    roberto
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by roberto | [ Reply to This ]



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