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    dots Submission Name: Do I Know You?dots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1347/372
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1600



    Description:
       This song is written from God's perspective.

    copyright 2006 Don Maresh and Greg Doyle
    Good News Praise Band


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    dotsDo I Know You?dots
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    Do I know you? Do you know me?
    Before you chose to walk away, I set you free
    Laid down my life ’cause I wanted to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you.

    Do I know you? Do you know me?
    Through all the suffering and pain it had to be.
    Laid down my life when I needed to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you.

    You’re just one heartbeat from eternity,
    Yet as you wander on your way,
    Have you forgotten, Child, what you mean to me?
    I think about you every day.
    I think about you every moment,
    I count each step you’ve gone astray.
    Did you know?

    Do I know you? Do you know me?
    Before you chose to walk away, I set you free
    Laid down my life ’cause I wanted to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you.

    Do I know you? Do you know me?
    Through all the suffering and pain it had to be.
    Laid down my life when I needed to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you.

    If you can’t see your doubt is the obstacle
    Can you believe you’ll find your way?
    If you’d have faith, you’d see each miracle
    And I could answer more each day.
    I think about you every moment.
    I count each breath until you pray.
    Did you know?

    Do I know you? Do you know me?
    Before you chose to walk away, I set you free
    Laid down my life ’cause I wanted to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you.

    Laid down my life when I needed to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you.




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    ||| Comments |||
      god as a guilt trip.
    *sigh*
    i figure i've run across you before.
    nice for a religious thing, i guess, if you're into it and all.

    i was brought up by an ordained minister. she was also a missionary. she taught me to hate her god and her religion through physical emotional and psychological torture and abuse.

    if god exists, he's got some explaining to do.
    | Posted on 2007-01-11 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      I think about you every moment.
    I count each breath until you pray

    I loved those lines. I have never thought about counting breaths. It was creative and true. It stuck out to me. They are very good lyrics.
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by Jan | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanks for sharing Gadfly. The ending is so powerful
    "Laid down my life when I needed to.
    You don’t know me, but I know you."
    | Posted on 2006-09-10 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]



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