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Submission Name: Living For The Sake of It dots

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Author:	Xx_bang_bang_
Elite Ratio:	1.89 - 23/24/19
Words:	182

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	171
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Description:
Just a little something I wrote, not what I feel.

Living For The Sake of It dots

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I’m living without feeling
And happiness is yet to come
But a constant sense of emptiness
Leaves me feeling numb

And it’s the hollowness inside of me
That makes me question living
I may smile and love and breathe
But I start to not believe

But just because I say so
Doesn’t make it true
Just because I see it
Doesn’t make it real

Yet I put away the razor blade
I wanna keep on living
Not for my own benefit
But for the ones that really love me

But just because I say so
Doesn’t make it true
Just cause I see it
Doesn’t make it real

I still feel the feeling
The ones that stays inside
The only time it can escape
Are the times that I cry

Yet I put away the razor blade
I wanna keep on living
Not for my own benefit
But for the ones that really love me

But just because I say so
Doesn’t make it true
Just because I see it
Doesn’t make it real

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||| Comments |||
  pOwerfull stuff, relates to alot of emotions we all share. Repetition gives it force... LOVe It
*Qfairybell*
| Posted on 2006-09-10 00:00:00 | by Qfairybell | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a great poem and would also make great lyrics. I wrote a thought similar to this just this morning. The repetition has 2 sides 2 it. IT makes it strong and gets the message across but it's also a weakness.
| Posted on 2006-09-10 00:00:00 | by riki_nl | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this much....i can definately relate to this...i don't think i could ever write a piece this real and good! keep writing great stuff!
-sam
| Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]

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