your lifes angel -------------------------------------------
i chose you from from the fluffy clouds/
to look over you whilst you lived/
to be your angel of protection/
im just lucky i was given this gift/
i watched as you entered this world/
i saw your parents smiling faces/
i saw you take your very first steps/
and the first time you tied your laces/
i was sent down here to guide you/
to comfort you when your sad/
to heal you when you are in pain/
and calm you when your mad/
every good thing you have done/
has warmed the hearts of angels/
you dont just see the world in black and white/
you picture it with colours and angles/
just want you to know that im with you/
with every step that you take/
i will have my wings wrapped around you/
whenever you feel lifes going to break/
its cute... i really like it, it does seem like it'd be written to either a child or a younger sibling that you're very protective over... i really like it, great write lizzie
aww. this seems like this would be written about either ur kid or a younger sibling who u personally feel responsible for. it's cool that u feel so protective although when they get older they're gonna want their space. lol. great job
Wow I liked this. It mades you feel like your guardian angel just contacted you to let you know your safe. :) I loved the ending, knowing that through any pain, youll have comfort through it. I dont think you could have wrote it any better. Great work.
Submission Name: your lifes angel
