Commen Brains, Commen Sence by DaGrimReaperess

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Submission Name: Commen Brains, Commen Sence dots

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Author:	DaGrimReaperess
ASL Info:	20/F/who gives a shyt
Elite Ratio:	0.35 - 416/177/14
Words:	63

Class/Type:	Poetry/Angry
Total Views:	253
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	465

Description:
yoooooooooo

Commen Brains, Commen Sence dots

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Yer story is old
like a freaking lie
Pride has immersed thee
in fucking liquid.

Do u not think?
Have you no remorse?
no regret?

no fucking regret...

your deeds have caressed thee
sweet in your eyes
grim for the people

lifeless and bleak

please piss off.

Submitted on 2006-09-10 16:34:21 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  Like it. Anger makes great inspiration.
| Posted on 2007-06-30 00:00:00 | by Vampiric Death | [ Reply to This ]
  lmfao.
i read this again, & its great. fkin funny too.
haha.
| Posted on 2007-05-28 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]
  This was funny to me! Were you pissed at some one oor what? LOL Great write!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  I like hoe you were like . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . really polite at the end. . . . . . . . saying please . . . . .. . . . . .that was funny stuff maaannnn.

G Freak

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| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
  hayyyyy, maaaaaan.... dis was some major writage right here. you did amazin on di one,. maaaannn... i cant type today..... whatev.... it dont matta
| Posted on 2006-09-21 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
  this should be called "common brains" because what you are expressing here to me is the majority of people around who dont feel just act on impulse and have no conscience effin PUKES>>>>nicewriting
| Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by urbanguttah | [ Reply to This ]
  lol, that's kinda [censored]in' funny, like big time. you could alsways just call it "piss off", idk. it's chill, short, and straight to the point
| Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
  Nigga, I think it's the title that turns everyone off. Try changing it.

I like this. And I'm not saying that because I'm your friend. Effin juvenile. If I didn't like it, I'd tell you and you know it.

It was good; interesting. The words are simple yet they have more depth to it than the eye can see. With this poem to each his own.

Love.
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]
  it is a verry powerful peice ayah. i like this one because it had a really good sense of your in command. well yeah

peace
FAna
| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]

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