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    dots Submission Name: Without you.dots
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    Author: FailureXX
    ASL Info:    15/f/MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 7/19/10
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 153
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1247



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    dotsWithout you.dots
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    The tears Fall from my eyes,
    Ripping down my cheeks.
    I'm sick of buying all her lies.
    I'm tired of playing life by weeks.
    I've tried to forget how it was before,
    Though I found myself only craving more.
    This feeling is overwhelming,
    And it haunts me like a curse.
    This infidelity is so incredibly tempting.
    It seems I'm only making things much worse.
    Best friends means, I'd die for you.
    Best friends means I'd lie for you.
    Lie down inside this casket,
    Six feet underneath the snow.
    This pain I've learned to mask it.
    Since you're gone you have to know,
    Inside this place I'm living in,
    It's so terribly cold.
    I can't do much else but sin.
    Without you I've begun to fold.
    I miss the smell of raindrops,
    Falling to our toes.
    Standing on the rooftops,
    Sniffing with our nose.
    I've got a funny feeling,
    That this life will be revealing.
    I'm gone without your presence,
    I'm dead without your escence.
    I'm gone without your presence,
    I'm dead without your escence.




    Submitted on 2006-09-10 19:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg....i TOTALLY love this!!!it's so real and i can feel just what you're going through by reading this! good job! this is going on my faves...
    -sam
    | Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]



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