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    dots Submission Name: Torn Travelersdots

    Author: MorbidAngel114
    ASL Info:    20/f/Behind you
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 445/480/114
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 712
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsTorn Travelersdots

    The wind wisps through her hair
    as her violet eyes slowly die
    black tears fall down her pale face

    what could have happened
    to make such a child weep this way?

    Across the way stands a boy
    his black hair falling down,
    shading his black eyes
    all along his cheek,
    lay remains of violet tears

    she whispers to him
    although he cannot hear
    He screams for her
    even if she is not there

    Across the world they travel
    searching for each other
    their soul bound together
    no matter how far apart

    together, alone
    they scream towards the sky
    wondering why,
    time tore them away

    the world may laugh at their troubles
    and may cry at their torment
    but we all know
    that somehow, in the end
    they’ll find a way.

    Submitted on 2006-09-10 21:55:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awwww...this is somewhat sad but still has the meaning of hope towards the end of it.

    I liked how it was written as if someone else was speaking of the two. Poems written like that carry a lot more in terms of the reader being able to visualize certain parts they read.

    Good one Kat...thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      See..now I just want to hug you and never let go. *Sighs* I'm sorry you miss him so much. I wish I could zap him there to spend time with you every night.
    *BIG HUGS*

    Big Sister
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]

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