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    dots Submission Name: 9/11dots
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    Author: riki_nl
    ASL Info:    20/M/NL
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 20/18/6
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    Today is the 5 year anniversary of 9/11
    Can you even call this an anniverary? An aniversary is something thats supposed to remind people of a joyful act. Not of an act of such atrocity.

    I heard the most beautiful song today. It made me cry. It's a tribute song. You can listen to it on this page: http://www.jontzen.com/tribute.htm

    What these terrorists did was unnaceptable. Children lost their parents and now live in foster care. There is not a day that goes by that I don't feel hate for the people that set this event in motion.

    When I saw the images again on tv this morning I bursted out in tears once again. I'm supposed to go to a party tonight but I dont think it's fitting to go.




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      i feel the exact same way...its not the happiest thought though...good poem though and keep writing
    | Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by Amberger | [ Reply to This ]
      I share your view, 110%! My aunt was in the second tower when the plane hit, and she was killed instantly.
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by DarkLadyWolf | [ Reply to This ]
      So true!! 9/11 is never that good of a thing to think about. There are anniversarys like weddings. This is just a memory. It's so wrong to call something that was so evil; good.
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by Solitary Blue | [ Reply to This ]


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