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I love you


Author: Holy Wood
ASL Info:    27/F/TX
Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 179 /198 /52
Words: 144
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Description:

to my boyfriend... the one that's there for me no matter what. i love him dearly.


I love you


i love you because you make me feel special
i love you because you make me smile
i love you because you make me feel essential
i love you because you make it worthwhile

i love you more every day
i'll love you till the end
i love how i never have to say
that i love being your best friend

i love how you understand me
i love every day we spend together
i love how we always agree
i love that you would never love another

i love how honest you are
i love that the most
i love everything so far
i love that we are so close

i will love you forever
as long as you love me in return
i love that your love will end never
and for your love i will always yearn




Submitted on 2006-09-11 12:26:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  oh wow, i like this.
young love that's what it sounds like, and it sounds like you got alot of it.

i've been trying to write my boyfriend a poem for a long time but i just cant get out how i feel, and THIS this poem is how i feel. so i might read it to him if thats okay, no worries i'll tell him you wrote it.

well GREAT write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

xox Crazy
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
  i love ur poem for the simple reason that u have someone who loves u so much and u still instill in me by ur words that people can be loved and trusted
| Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by anna kareinina | [ Reply to This ]
  what can i say? i guess you have a good idea here in this writing but i think you abuse of using the same words i mean "i love you because of ... " and then in each paragraphg you repeat the begining part of a statement; it seems annoying for a reader to see this. i mean if you want to be a poet you have to use a lot of images and symbols in your writing. so i recommend you to use more words and trying to be unique when writing because a child can repeat the same words in a writing... well take care and have a nice day. please if you have time take a look to writings i would really appreciate it...
peace and love!
Victor
| Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]


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