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Author: Twisted
Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159 /57 /75
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Well, uh, I guess it's something. Look for a story that's coming soon called "Hate me."


Please don't



Please don't lie to me, come and return to the arms I have held you in whilst you have forsaken me.




Submitted on 2006-09-11 16:57:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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