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    Author: always_confused
    ASL Info:    16/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 4/9/21
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 767
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1243



    Description:
       something i should've told someone before they ended things...


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    i sit there
    thinking of you
    wondering
    wondering if you're thinking of me
    i know how i feel
    but i'm at a loss for words
    anything i say
    would just take away your meaning
    no words come close
    to describing how i feel
    when it comes to being with you
    you take away my pain
    my fears
    do you know this to be true?
    you've walked in and out of my life
    a couple times before
    now i feel you're here to stay
    sometimes i think i'm dreaming
    like you're too good to be true
    i hope we never part
    cause without you i'd be lost
    torn to pieces
    after everything thats gone weong
    you're the on thats been right
    i've denied this in the past
    for that i'm truly sorry
    don't want to lock you out
    don't want to push you away
    no matter what i say
    stay true to me
    stand by me
    tell me everythings o.k.
    even when i refuse
    i give you fair warning
    you're dealing with
    the queen of complication
    i tend to learn things the hard way
    but thats just who i am




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