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    dots Submission Name: English Classdots
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    Author: MaeBirdie
    ASL Info:    17/female/US
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 59/51/30
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Description:
       This is my comment on my AP English class.
    Yay senior year.


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    dotsEnglish Classdots
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    English rips my soul out,
    Strains it through a collander,
    Then crushes it beneath a white pump.
    The last thing it sees
    Before its last breath to oblivion
    Is a cruelly cheerful
    Flowered skirt.




    Submitted on 2006-09-11 20:08:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You have a wee typo in "Besfore." It was always math that made me cringe. (I suppose that's good since I got my degree in English). I swear Calculus made me near-suicidal. For some reason, I really like the image of "a cruelly cheerful/ Flowered skirt."

    I hope all is well,
    Amy
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]



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