Death of an Angel
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For those of you who don't know, I kind of dropped off the radar for a while, that's because I was in the hospital... the psych ward to be specific..... basically it kind of kills you in there.. and that is what this is about.I dont know though, I guess it's not really poetry or anyhting really, but I needed to work it out.
Death of an Angel
It quiet here So quiet you can't even hear them dying Trying trying to escape It kills you inside The white walls The hushed voices You just lay there Longing Longing for a splash of color Of red Bland, down to the food Everything slows Until the faintest of heartbeats Stops And something inside you just.. Fades away Even after you've left It's never the same It changes you, this place The color inside is gone And everything you do No matter what it is Is to bring it back And you finally realize that you can't That its dead And that inside you've died with it... |
Submitted on 2006-09-11 22:29:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| This is really depressing, I'm sorry you had to go through that. It sounds so bland....but then again I don't believe it to be a paradise either. Good imagery I think you could a little more elaborate with the details and add some emotion. Hopefully the silence wasn't too difficult for you, it has a tendency to be quite loud. | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ] | |
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