It quiet here
So quiet you can't even hear them dying
trying to escape
It kills you inside
The white walls
The hushed voices
You just lay there
Longing for a splash of color
Bland, down to the food
Until the faintest of heartbeats
And something inside you just..
Even after you've left
It's never the same
It changes you, this place
The color inside is gone
And everything you do
No matter what it is
Is to bring it back
And you finally realize that you can't
That its dead
And that inside you've died with it...
| This is really depressing, |
I'm sorry you had to go through that.
It sounds so bland....but then again I don't believe it to be a paradise either.
Good imagery I think you could a little more elaborate with the details and add some emotion.
Hopefully the silence wasn't too difficult for you, it has a tendency to be quite loud.
|| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ] |