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Death of an Angel


Author: lucianraven
ASL Info:    21/M/Spfld Il
Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 49 /67 /19
Words: 109
Class/Type: Deep Thought /Depressed
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For those of you who don't know, I kind of dropped off the radar for a while, that's because I was in the hospital... the psych ward to be specific..... basically it kind of kills you in there.. and that is what this is about.I dont know though, I guess it's not really poetry or anyhting really, but I needed to work it out.


Death of an Angel



It quiet here
So quiet you can't even hear them dying
Trying
trying to escape
It kills you inside
The white walls
The hushed voices
You just lay there
Longing
Longing for a splash of color
Of red
Bland, down to the food
Everything slows
Until the faintest of heartbeats
Stops
And something inside you just..
Fades away
Even after you've left
It's never the same
It changes you, this place
The color inside is gone
And everything you do
No matter what it is
Is to bring it back
And you finally realize that you can't
That its dead
And that inside you've died with it...




Submitted on 2006-09-11 22:29:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is really depressing,
I'm sorry you had to go through that.
It sounds so bland....but then again I don't believe it to be a paradise either.
Good imagery I think you could a little more elaborate with the details and add some emotion.
Hopefully the silence wasn't too difficult for you, it has a tendency to be quite loud.
| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]


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