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    dots Submission Name: Intimacydots
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    Author: phoenix sun
    ASL Info:    49 year old man, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 10/11/19
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsIntimacydots
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    I thought I knew the meaning of the word
    Until I was with you
    And then my world moved, stars danced in the sky
    Then I knew it wasn't true

    You made me feel, know and be the word
    Like nothing or no one before
    And reader you might think me absurd
    Find out for yourself I must implore

    For there is nothing like it in this life
    To be with someone that you love
    A moment removed from your turmoil and strife
    And sent with them to skies above

    Yes I flew the skies within our passion
    To heights never before attained
    The word like a robe of fashion
    Those within it are unashamed

    Within this robe, enwrapped so to speak
    I would to dwell my love with you
    And should we tell, let the word leak
    Is this what we should do?

    I now know the meaning of the word
    It's no more a fable or fantasy
    I am not rich but I can afford
    To reveal to you the word, intimacy




    Submitted on 2006-09-11 23:40:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice can u have a look at my work plz
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by draconus | [ Reply to This ]



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