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revolutionary theory (verse 2)

Author: unknown soldier
ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
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revolutionary theory (verse 2)

Yo they say knowledge is power
So America is ignorant cuz we were powerless when we tried saving the towers
All these governments official are cowards
Too terrified to realize this is our final hour
Crushing Bush’s spinal column to destroy and rebuild
Young boys try to avoid getting killed

Hold on, I’m still trying to make you think
This land is like Atlantis
It’s all good until this bitch begins to sink
We got more ice than we need to fill a rink
But shit can change in the time it takes to blink
Worshipping false gods, call em the pantheon
The world’s against us but still we carry on
Stare me down because your eyes are glued to the truth
You killed Pac and Big but they still live on through the youth
Battling brutal bastards basing biases on these backwards ambitions
You need to know the mission of the Death and Depression Coalition
Lost without a dream so we search for stolen visions
Stay on the straight and narrow but still we go to prison
The shot was dead on but it still came close to missing
Safety precautions, getting suicidal soldiers christened
Holding perdition as I remold your new edition
Trying to stop your bitching
We need a change, fuck this completion
Battling for the top when we should be joining forces
Some of us are homeless while others are driving Porsches
Kids in the hood, they grow up so remorseless
Same revolution, we’re just taking different courses
Little girls get knocked up so they rush to get abortions
I’m the flicker of hope in a city that’s lost its torches

Submitted on 2006-09-11 23:54:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  "Battling brutal [censored]s basing biases on these backwards ambitions
You need to know the mission of the Death and Depression Coalition
Lost without a dream so we search for stolen visions"

these lines are amazing and i love the last one as well. I think this is deffinitly one of your best cant wait for more!

| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
  Damn! Damn...this was unlike anything you have ever posted. This was a no bars held back type of rap. I just think of Jadakiss "Why" when I read this. You touched on so many subjects, yet showed how they all tie to 9-11 and now. Your rage was picture clear per line. Your desire to see change and not dilly dally anymore was what stuck out to me the most. All the while you spoke truth. Two thumbs up candyman! This is a fav.

| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]

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