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    dots Submission Name: Little Herodots
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    Author: Judy
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 579/569/93
    Words: 336
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       It's a horrible thing for parents to lose their child. This devastating thing recently happened to some people I know. Their grief is inconsolable. Request your prayers for the family.


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    dotsLittle Herodots
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    In memory of little A
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    You were the sunshine in my life
    The apple of your father's eye
    Like a little hero conquering the world
    Laughter and love you did supply

    Your first six summers was a joyous time
    Winter with you was wonderland too
    Autumn and spring memories intertwined
    How did I know you'd leave me so blue?

    I kissed your knee and tear strained cheek
    That first time you fell when I paid little heed
    Little knowing there would be many next times
    Little knowing where it would one day lead

    When he told us grim faced, the devastating news
    The unpronounceable name etched in my brain
    I hardly remembered that I had to breathe
    My baby was dying, my life was in vain

    Yet little hero, you were never more so
    Needles and scalpels, you bore them all
    In the midst of your pain, you comforted us
    when we broke down, you stood so tall

    "Don't give my toys to my little cousin,
    He may have them after my birthday
    I know you'll make it special this year
    You don't turn seven every year anyway!"

    You grinned and said you couldn't wait
    To go back to school and play in the sun
    My little hero was getting better
    If anyone could make it, he was the one

    Then one day without warning
    You took a turn for the worse
    Why do I remember every minute of this ordeal?
    Your father ran and screamed for a nurse

    I held you down as best as I could
    The end came - it was over in a minute
    But in my heart, I live it everyday
    My little hero, my sunshine
    How am I to go on?

    Yet even though it tears me apart
    And I'll never be whole again
    I don't wish you were never in my life
    You'll always be my little hero
    Thank you for six years of teaching me to love




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 12:02:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Goodness this poem was so powerfull and strong the loss of a child must be such a devestating thing to parents and to all the children that are effected I think the most sad thing when viewing the loss of a little child is watching the little casket go on by and thinking that they had more life to live. This is such a toughing poem I think I will add this to my favs.

    much LOVE
    James
    | Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW. Losing a child is the most horrible thing in the world to go through.... What can i say?? I'm truly sorry for your pain, i wish you the best.
    Not everyone deals with grief in the same way, but i have to say that writing about it is the best way to heal. It helps a lot.

    Best wishes.

    Unicorn poet.
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by Unicorn Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really sad, I have tears in my eyes still.
    I hope you get through it okay.
    I believe this was the most beautiful line in the whole story.

    "Thank you for six years of teaching me to love"
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, this is so sad. I'm truly sorry. I know that losing a child has got to be one of the most painful things in the world.

    I'm always here if you need me,
    Amy
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]



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