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    Author: always_confused
    ASL Info:    16/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 4/9/21
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1153



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    i look in your eyes
    i see the pain when you look at me
    you may not realize it
    but i hurt more than you
    you took away everything i knew
    you say you still care
    it doesn't make sense
    nothing does now that you're gone
    you've left us all in tears
    everything has changed
    i know things get bad sometimes
    but you never had to run away
    i'll never forget the day you walked out
    the pain will live in me forever
    you say it's hard for you
    you'll never know
    just how much pain you put us through
    you come around
    thinking it's o.k.
    sometimes i can't take it
    you've disappeared
    only to return again
    i have hope for you to stay
    but you never do
    i miss you so much at times
    my pain i don't express
    in you eyes tears equal weakness
    but in mine they reveal truth
    something you never showed
    you keep pushing us away
    at the times you need us most
    why are you so distant?
    i guess i'll never know




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