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    dots Submission Name: Alone In Solitudedots
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    Author: RedheadFreak
    ASL Info:    16/F/Oh
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsAlone In Solitudedots
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    I'm surrounded by people
    and they're all staring,
    Staring at me.
    Is there something on my face?,
    on my shirt,
    between my teeth?
    I can't figure it out.
    My heart beats louder....
    faster.......
    It feels like it's going to pound out of my chest.
    Now I'm feeling quite faint
    Everyone still staring
    I can feel them glaring.
    Then I fall into a pool of darkness.
    Now it's no one but me!




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 15:07:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was an interesting poem. I liked it for the casual way you wrote. Very simple language, but you still got your point across. I couldn't tell if you were trying for a rhyme sequence or not, but overal I thought it was a pretty good write.

    -Guernica
    | Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by Guernica | [ Reply to This ]

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