Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Alone In Solitudedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: RedheadFreak
    ASL Info:    16/F/Oh
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 619
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 519



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsAlone In Solitudedots
    -------------------------------------------


    I'm surrounded by people
    and they're all staring,
    Staring at me.
    Is there something on my face?,
    on my shirt,
    between my teeth?
    I can't figure it out.
    My heart beats louder....
    faster.......
    It feels like it's going to pound out of my chest.
    Now I'm feeling quite faint
    Everyone still staring
    I can feel them glaring.
    Then I fall into a pool of darkness.
    Now it's no one but me!




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 15:07:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      This was an interesting poem. I liked it for the casual way you wrote. Very simple language, but you still got your point across. I couldn't tell if you were trying for a rhyme sequence or not, but overal I thought it was a pretty good write.

    -Guernica
    | Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by Guernica | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    AI written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    prison written by ShyOne
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Push written by JanePlane
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    written by Daniel Barlow
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Love written by saartha
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Carry written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Fasade written by jackz
    Every..... written by jackz

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to two comments without commenting.