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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    Description:
       Chapter Three from the short story in the story called, " Una lujuria de vampiro."


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    IV.
    Chapter Three


    “ I pity snowflakes.” She whispered sadly.

    “ Why do you ‘pity’ snowflakes?”

    She smiled. “ They are so sad. And they say rain is sad.”

    “ What do you mean love?”

    She shrugged. “ I mean they fall from the sky, the heavens, only to die, and do it all over again.”

    “ Snowflakes die?”

    “ Yes. Think about it. They fall like pure angles, and become tainted when they land. Like fallen angels.”

    He nodded as if agreeing. “ So how do they die?”

    “ Well, they are immortal when they are floating. But as more them land, the original ones disappear and die.”

    “ Ah. How do you think of these things?”

    “ I don’t know. They remind life.” She glanced at him, knowing a question was forming.

    “ No matter how immortal we feel, they’ll always be more of us, and then…we die.”




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