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    dots Submission Name: City Jungledots
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    Author: Charles F Kane
    ASL Info:    34
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 4/17/14
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 635
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 965



    Description:
       The view of someone who walks in a big city


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    dotsCity Jungledots
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    I walk the streets alone
    in the city jungle
    there's no green
    no trees, no leaves

    Only grey concrete
    black asphalt
    cold metallic streetcars
    cold people
    with eyes that do not see

    They do not see
    the forgotten ones
    the lost ones
    those who sleep in the alleyways
    those who die in the backyards
    of drugs and booze
    in the coldness of night

    They do not see
    the rape victims
    the brutal killings
    those who die alone
    those who suffer
    whose pain's too much to bear

    I walk the streets tonight
    like a lonely and lost God
    who no longer can create
    who no longer can redeem

    I am no Jesus, No Buddha
    No Muhammed or Allah
    I am just one lonely man
    walking the city jungle
    amongst its predators
    its killers and hunters




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 16:27:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the first line reminds me of greenday's "Boulavard of Broken Dreams". and in the last line of the 2nd stanza, the word doesn't should be don't. but good points; it's all very true. keep em coming...
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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