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baby shoes for sale, never been worn

Author: brokenmirror
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baby shoes for sale, never been worn

there's the title....what direction should it go in, ideas?

Submitted on 2006-09-12 16:37:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I agree with the person below me but i also could go into many other directions such as adaption of even a kidnapping. but I am sure what ever direction you go in will be great let me know

| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
  I agree a very young child who died or an abortion and never got the chance to wear them. It could be very good. I love the title by the way defintly caught my attention.
| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by -amberina | [ Reply to This ]
  i thought of abortion the second i read this. like a baby who never got a chance to wear their shoes. or a miscarriage. 'cause those are really sad.
| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by narcolepsy | [ Reply to This ]

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