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Author: silentpoison
ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204 /259 /118
Words: 112
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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Dead moon rising,
circle of blood around the moon, everyone is coming out, lucid movements in the night, is someone gunna die.

Pretty girls standing there, they tighten their corsets and brush their hair, pretty girls stanfing there, porcelin faces and Long black hair.
pretty girls, Pretty girls.


Pretty boys sitting there, Baggy jeans and blood red hair, pretty boys sitting there, vacant looks and ice-cold stares.
Pretty boys, pretty boys


Pretty Boys and Pretty girls, together at last, in the shadows they will lurk, waiting for tonight,
the ritual tonight. IS someone gunna die?

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Submitted on 2004-05-22 10:02:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i really loved this. it's a bit creepy and foreboding. i've got no clue what's going to happen to them, and that's probably how it would remain effective, with no resolution. i don't think, if you were more detailed you could possibly meet what you've acheived with the build up. Excellent.
| Posted on 2004-05-22 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]

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