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    dots Submission Name: love me will yadots
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    Author: Fraser
    ASL Info:    26
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 30/55/35
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotslove me will yadots
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    one wonders where you are
    where do you dwell love of mine
    are you singing a song in some town
    or fallen over drunk on wine

    i swear i have seen you in my dreams
    vibrate, quick and young
    still wise enough to know better
    like a lion leading his herd

    will we cross paths, i hope
    sharing our deepiest secrets with one another
    i will dip myself in the pond of my memories
    as you will do the same

    solitude is a strange friend
    its good for knowing oneself but nothing else
    i will open my heart to another
    you my dearest will read it

    love me will ya
    take a chance on a young man soul
    forget your fears and fall in the river
    pull the sword from the hilt and strike true




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 17:34:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      As I recited it aloud it sounded really good. I imagined this 'young man' in your poem like a cub hopping up and down hungry for attention. Don't know why though :-) . This is an intelligent piece. Bravo!
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]



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