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    dots Submission Name: Action Movie Hero Boydots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340/348/146
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 953
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1346



    Description:
       This comes from a friend of mine Niel Cicierega. Tell me what you think, I'll relate to him.


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    dotsAction Movie Hero Boydots
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    I gotta figure out where Mommy keeps the dynamite.
    I'll get some measuring tape, so I can time it right.
    I know it's dangerous, I know you're thinking I am a fool.
    But it's the only chance I'll ever get to look so cool.
    (look so cool)

    Hey, look at me
    casually walking away,
    like action movie hero boy
    in slo-mo,
    everything glowing and blowing to bits right behind me.

    You see it all the time in theaters on the silver screen,
    like when the good guy blows the bad guy's house to smithereens.
    I got a movie making camera and a dozen grenades.
    I'm looking tough, I got the stuff, I got the spiffy shades.
    (spiffy shades)

    Hey, look at me
    casually walking away,
    like action movie hero boy
    in slo-mo,
    everything glowing and blowing to bits right behind me.

    I am aware it's just a movie
    I'm aware it's a cliché
    I am aware I'm being stupid
    I'm aware of that, but hey

    This is just something I gotta do. Yeah.

    Hey, look at me
    casually stumbling down
    like action movie blooper reel
    in slo-mo,
    everything glowing and blowing to bits, including me.




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 22:16:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Brain,

    I like this piece. Is it a song. Cause for some reason I seems like one. I really like how it's about how movies and video games and well media in general all premote violence.

    They make violence look cool, but it's really not at all. Who could think killing others and stealing cars is cool.

    Nice write.

    Tell Niel it's approved my me!

    {peaces}
    | Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by GOGO1877 | [ Reply to This ]
      I gotta figure out where Mommy keeps the dynamite.
    I'll get some measuring tape, so I can time it right.
    I know it's dangerous, I know you're thinking I am a fool.
    But it's the only chance I'll ever get to look so cool.
    (look so cool)

    Hey, look at me
    casually walking away,
    like action movie hero boy
    in slo-mo,
    everything glowing and blowing to bits right behind me.

    You see it all the time in theaters on the silver screen,
    like when the good guy blows the bad guy's house to smithereens.
    I got a movie making camera and a dozen grenades.
    I'm looking tough, I got the stuff, I got the spiffy shades.
    (spiffy shades)

    Hey, look at me
    casually walking away,
    like action movie hero boy
    in slo-mo,
    everything glowing and blowing to bits right behind me.

    I am aware it's just a movie
    I'm aware it's a cliché
    I am aware I'm being stupid
    I'm aware of that, but hey

    This is just something I gotta do. Yeah.

    Hey, look at me
    casually stumbling down
    like action movie blooper reel
    in slo-mo,
    everything glowing and blowing to bits, including me



    Too many vidoe games, perhaps? Too much Hollywood/subgenre action/"blowed up real good" input stitched to the visual cortex? No matter...

    This had a beautiful touch of irony in the idiot death of 'action movie hero' dope, something those who've seen multitiudes of movies would have known was about to happen before the first reel was done.

    I'd suggest you tell your friend this has more potential than most of the fertilizer currently polluting the airwaves.

    Very nice.
    Bill.
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      eep! How un-cheerful.
    It has a certain appeal, but I'd like to know _why_ the kid-with-dynamite felt compelled to blow something up. Yes, it says it looks cool in movies, but his own personal reasons. Then again, perhaps explainations aren't required in songs, so nevermind.

    ^_^

    ~Birdie~
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by MaeBirdie | [ Reply to This ]


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