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    dots Submission Name: Run Through Your Blooddots
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    Author: disturbedx1000
    ASL Info:    28/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 204/326/124
    Words: 345
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1014
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 2404



    Description:
       idk i think this is the last of my disgression from my relationship that lasted 2years and 7 months...


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    dotsRun Through Your Blooddots
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    i'm sick and tired,
    of being sick and twisted,
    all my life,
    i've been sick and sadistic,

    i need a life,
    to feed this inner demon,
    one to take,
    and engulf into myself,

    *chorus*
    does it run- through your blood,
    to satisfy my needs?

    does it run- through your blood,
    to surpress my hateful deeds?

    does it run- through your blood,
    to have me seek you out?

    DOES IT RUN- THROUGH YOUR BLOOD?!

    *end*

    it runs through my viens,
    i love this desired pain,(WHY?!)

    i'm gona rise against,
    your thoughts and intents,(HURT!)

    i'm sick of the sound,
    your voice that lets me down,(MY!)

    i'm not listening to you anymore,
    becuase it's becoming so sore,(HEART!)

    (WHY HURT MY HEART?!)

    *chorus*
    does it run- through your blood,
    to satisfy my needs?

    does it run- through your blood,
    to surpress my hateful deeds?

    does it run- through your blood,
    to have me seek you out?

    DOES IT RUN- THROUGH YOUR BLOOD?!

    *end*

    your the one i seek,
    the one i adore,
    the one i will,
    use to even the score,

    you destroyed me,
    from the inside out,
    from my mind to my heart,
    now theres one thing,

    *chorus*
    does it run- through your blood,
    to satisfy my needs?

    does it run- through your blood,
    to surpress my hateful deeds?

    does it run- through your blood,
    to have me seek you out?

    DOES IT RUN- THROUGH YOUR BLOOD?!

    *end*

    so tell me now while i'm here,
    answer my questions my former dear,
    i'm i the one you fear?
    are my words becomeing clear?

    does it run- through your blood,
    the one thing that i seek?

    does it run- through your blood?
    if so i want it back,

    DOSE IT RUN- THROUGH YOUR BLOOD...
    my love... is it there?

    with out it my heart grows cold,
    does it run through your blood...

    the one thing i gave you...
    wheres my love?




    Submitted on 2006-09-12 22:17:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I always like your songs. This one sounds like it should be screamed like....of course...Disturbed. It is very angy and hurt. I am glad you wrote another song I always like reading them. Thanks
    Briannan
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by Briannan | [ Reply to This ]


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