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    dots Submission Name: I HATE YOU!!!dots
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    Author: franki jorge
    ASL Info:    19/f/ca
    Elite Ratio:    0.82 - 5/12/54
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 778
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1726



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    dotsI HATE YOU!!!dots
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    you make me so sick
    i cant even stand
    im so fuckin sick of you
    "stop it " i demand

    your breaking my sould in half
    but i know you really dont care
    you know all you've done
    so you sit there and stare

    i see the way you are
    dont even lie!!
    you would never take a second look
    even if i died

    i hate the way you treat me
    like im not even there
    i close my eyes and shut u out
    but your horrid voice i can still hear

    to him you only speak
    and me you dont dare
    becuz between just you and me
    we have nothing to share

    you used to say "i love you"
    now you dont even say hi
    its all becuz
    you thought i said goodbye

    i cant make you smile
    and he can make you laugh
    breaking up with you
    made me really mad

    seeing you with him
    hurts me so fuckin bad
    i cant even explain
    but im really really sad

    i wish it never happened
    that which happened Monday
    but i'll get over it
    i'll think about how...someday

    dont worry i wont cut
    becuz your not even worth it
    yes my heart is broken
    and yes im hella fuckin sick

    SICK OF YOUR SHIT!!!
    SICK OF YOU ALONE!!!
    GOD IM SO FUCKIN HAPPY
    THAT YOU DONT HAVE A CLONE!!!!!!!

    everything you do
    is just a big ass LIE!
    why cant you just leave me alone
    leave me alone to die

    DIE YOU FUCKIN BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!






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