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    dots Submission Name: portrait of gracedots
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    Author: lynn7
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 298/212/58
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsportrait of gracedots
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    looking through the mirror tonight
    I see the reflection of my face
    noticing my youth that slowly fades
    like leaves falling off a vine
    this vessel is aging, time is running
    as if letting go, of what once was lost
    to gain the worth that shines
    from the center that is within
    waiting for tomorrow with confidence
    for my race is not yet run
    this glow is not my own
    it’s the Grace that shines down upon
    to give back the dawn of a day.. once gone




    Submitted on 2006-09-13 00:43:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Life sure is for living Lynn, and all our clock's are running. I think sometimes, we all feel what you are saying here. The trick of course is to make sure that life does not pass us by, and we do out utmost to find fulfillment, happiness and peace within ourselves.

    Another very good write from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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