A Dark, Twisted Lullaby by Charles F Kane

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Submission Name: A Dark, Twisted Lullaby dots

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Author:	Charles F Kane
ASL Info:	34
Elite Ratio:	1.43 - 4/17/14
Words:	122

Class/Type:	Poetry/
Total Views:	853
Average Vote:	3.6667
Bytes:	867

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A Dark kind of lullaby, not exactly what you want to sing to your kids.

A Dark, Twisted Lullaby dots

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Sleep little Baby
Sleep little one
Your parents are all dead
and all turned to bone

Sleep little Baby
Don't say a word
God may buy you
a mocking bird

And if that bird
hack out your eyes
Angels gonna fly you
Where the truths are lies

So dream little baby
That your mama lies
in another mans bed
as your daddy dies

And your sister turning tricks
And brother's sucking dicks
Granny's using drugs
And granddad's full of bugs

So dream, little kid
dream of a better day
where you can live free
and don't have to pray

And if that better day
doesn't quite appear
Pray that you don't
have to live in fear

Submitted on 2006-09-13 05:12:39 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That is sick and twisted, I like it
| Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by Lil_ Buddy | [ Reply to This ]
  very morbid...but i love it! it grossed me out just a bit...but it was brilliant. i wonder...how did you come up with this???
-sam
| Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]
  whoa this painted one creepy mental picture for me. good work. it had great imagry. keep em comin...
</3 lisa
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
  Kind of humorous and dark at the same time, but then I have a twisted mind,keep writing, Dean
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
  This was pretty good, only thing that stood out to me that you should change is "Where the truth are lies" I think it sounds better "Where the truth IS lies" But it's pretty good, keep up the work.
D.C.M.
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by D.C.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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