this is a wonderful write and a great example of free verse sounds like something that would go on in my mind its very moving and full of emotion in no way is there a trace of apathy to be found keep writing
Wow definetly a good free verse. It gets you hooked and reading till the end. It gets you fearing for the person, you dont want them to change. :) I dont know what to write, its so full of emotion, it just left me speechless. :) But its a great write. I really enjoyed it.