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    dots Submission Name: *Where Im Fromdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 687
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 220



    Description:
       hey guyz this is the same deal as the other one:
    -english assignment
    -"I am From..." !st line->place, 2nd line->childhood memory, 3rd line->a sense, 4th line->something u watch/learned/read, 5th line-> a wrap up line
    one lillte difference this one was wrote by shelby and the other one was written by shannon....so u can bash it as much as possible....thanx


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    dots*Where Im Fromdots
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    I am from Canada,
    I am from a tree fort in my friends backyard,
    I am from the smell of freshly baked chocolate chip cookies,
    I am from Big Momma's House,
    The memories of life complete me.




    Submitted on 2006-09-13 14:21:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't like writing in a set form, which is maybe why I'm not getting much out of this one. However, I like your icon alot ; )
    | Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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