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    dots Submission Name: its goin to come....dots
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    Author: elohimswork
    ASL Info:    30/M/Chi
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 76/96/39
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2089



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    dotsits goin to come....dots
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    its goin to come...

    when i get
    off my ass
    & start taking
    things in life
    more seriously...

    its goin to come...

    when you look
    at a woman or a man an
    all you see is...
    just a
    woman & a man...

    its comin....

    when this poetry thing
    of my mine
    spreads its wings

    when the
    wieght
    on my heart
    from not understanding
    & wondering
    why we dont
    luv each other better
    melts away...

    when fear gets
    my 4 page
    Dear. John letter...

    when i...
    stand in the sun
    & not think
    about
    natures poetry...

    when i
    stop playin
    concentration
    with these ladies faces
    thinkin she's "Lady"...

    when
    tomorrow
    is always
    a better day...

    when i...
    start to care
    about the
    reaction
    my words make...

    when...
    cookin
    for one
    turns into cookin
    for two.
    then two
    add
    two more...

    when i...
    listen
    to everything
    the most high says...

    when its...
    not just read
    or said...
    but lives on
    through
    the heart
    mind &
    the body of the soul...

    when i...
    aint got to
    get up &
    work for nobody
    but me...

    its goin to come...

    its comin...

    when i...
    close the
    first chapter
    an stop
    repeating the
    2nd verse...

    its goin to come...

    a change...
    is goin to come

    a...
    change
    is...
    goin
    to
    come.

    take me home
    Sam...





    4 fingers an a pen poetry...




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