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    dots Submission Name: Empty Heart.dots
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    Author: imaginarylight6
    ASL Info:    17/f/under your bed
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 27/45/33
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 545



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       I dunno, I just wrote it. I guess it explains my true feelings and situations I'm going through at the moment..


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    dotsEmpty Heart.dots
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    Whisper sweet nothings into my ear
    Make me forget all about how I suffer
    Day in and day out this hell we call life.
    Tell me darling, am I what one would call beautiful?
    Am I the dejected shadow in the corner of the room? Silence turns to a harsh ringing,
    And I find myself alone in the shadows,
    once again abandoned for the sake of eternity
    My soul breaks loose.
    I can monologuise, but I can't speak.
    I am frozen, I am slain.
    This is what we call an empty heart.




    Submitted on 2006-09-13 19:20:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i really like this. a lonely heart seeking love....my favorite lines were:
    "Make me forget all about how I suffer
    Day in and day out this hell we call life."
    sad how she never reached her desires in the end. great write...keep em coming.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]



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