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Raining Blood


Author: Gmann
ASL Info:    19/M/WA
Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 98 /125 /73
Words: 173
Class/Type: Rant /Dark
Total Views: 1044
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Description:




Raining Blood



Eyes of black demise
Lips of Satan’s delight
Anger sparks like fire
Warring in the night
Hands of solid strength
Heart of heavy stones
Serpents in my head
Demons in my bones
Tongue of forks and knives
Soul of broken ice
Throat of kerosene wishes
Constricted with my vice
Tears of ashy splendor
Flake like rotting snow
Down my leather cheeks
That in the moon doth glow
Arms are opened wide
Face turned toward the sky
Mouth agape and trembling
Catching droplets as they fly
The water hits my tongue
Like a tainted copper flood
‘Tis not water raining down
But shining drops of blood!
Clouds are swirling menaces
The thunder, it doth ring
I’m playing in the puddles
And the darkness hears me sing:
“It’s raining, it’s pouring,
The red-stained Dove is soaring
He once was spry, but now he’ll die
Hear Hell’s demons roaring!”
Life is tainted
The world is painted
The eerie colour of death
The torture I’ll flee
By the crimson sea
And give the waves my final breath!




Submitted on 2006-09-13 20:15:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yes, it might be a little easier to read if you did put a little break between the stanzas, but i ABSOLUTELY loved it! especially the imagery... this piece almost reminds me of something POE would write. :-)
| Posted on 2007-12-16 00:00:00 | by MidnightMelody | [ Reply to This ]
  great imagery the song is great and the fact that its dark and has an evil feel to it makes it all the better put it into paraghraphs or stanzas your choice i think that would make it a little better put breaks in it ya know otherwise this is really great write some more i would love to read it if it comes out like this
| Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by blood red angel | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow! amazing. I absolutely loved it. Such imagery. So much description. Just like Stygian said, so dark. :)
And the little song"
“It’s raining, it’s pouring,
The red-stained Dove is soaring
He once was spry, but now he’ll die
Hear Hell’s demons roaring!”
Did you write that? that is awesome.
Truely awesome work. I enjoyed it so much.

Meg
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh, wow! I love the imagery in this poem and the dark, macabre feel of this. Totally surreal and different.
| Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by Stygian | [ Reply to This ]


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