What I'm Afraid To Say by Foreseer

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Author:	Foreseer
ASL Info:	20/F/In Love
Elite Ratio:	2.73 - 156/86/23
Words:	76

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	988
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	427

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Uhh, it may sound confusing a little but bear with me.

What I'm Afraid To Say dots

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To open my eyes
and see what I see.
I'd keep them shut;
I don't want it to be.

I'm afraid to shine,
to burn my flame so bright.
I know it's mine;
to not lock it up tight.

You know me...
within a second.
Could you say
where I want to fly away?

Without a thought
it all falls apart.

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  I really liked reading it and felt like i could relate alot to it just because i think it describes me on most days too... Good!
| Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Chelsea_Is_Neat | [ Reply to This ]
  I think that you described 'growing up' perfectly.

Teenage years are always very difficult years to cope with. All will settle down for you in years to come.

A very insightful write - well done Miriam.

Frank.
| Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  i really like this its really cute <3
| Posted on 2006-09-16 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.