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    dots Submission Name: What I'm Afraid To Saydots
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    Author: Foreseer
    ASL Info:    20/F/In Love
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 156/86/23
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhat I'm Afraid To Saydots
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    To open my eyes
    and see what I see.
    I'd keep them shut;
    I don't want it to be.

    I'm afraid to shine,
    to burn my flame so bright.
    I know it's mine;
    to not lock it up tight.

    You know me...
    within a second.
    Could you say
    where I want to fly away?

    Without a thought
    it all falls apart.




    Submitted on 2006-09-14 00:43:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked reading it and felt like i could relate alot to it just because i think it describes me on most days too... Good!
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Chelsea_Is_Neat | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that you described 'growing up' perfectly.

    Teenage years are always very difficult years to cope with. All will settle down for you in years to come.

    A very insightful write - well done Miriam.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this its really cute <3
    | Posted on 2006-09-16 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]


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