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    dots Submission Name: Harry's Stormdots
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    Author: snow
    ASL Info:    15 female NZ!
    Elite Ratio:    1.82 - 6/11/8
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
    Total Views: 140
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 408



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    dotsHarry's Stormdots
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    Purple worn,with a yellow tinge.
    As the sky begins to cringe.
    Rain pelts down on grumpy cats.
    While they chase that damn rat.

    Heaven roars with mighty thunder.
    Lightening stains the sky.
    And all the kids in primary school shake their heads and sigh.

    Except for little Harry who chases clouds.
    And wonders how the teachers never join in.




    Submitted on 2006-09-15 01:32:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really Really like this
    I only wish you would have made this Longer so My Youth could have stayed in front of my eyes a little longer
    This write remined me of my own childhood
    For I was too that Little child who always was alone away from any friends and enjoyed my own little world away from others
    To this day I still Love the Rain and cant figure out why so many associate the rain with depression
    To me the rain heals
    I also liked the line of grumpy cats
    To me that line refers to the lazy people who cant seem to find joy in anything
    Great Job
    I Loved this
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Ermmm. . .the poem sounded really beautiful
    but you never really specified what it was
    about. But as it is, the words are very
    poetic.
    | Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by GreyWater | [ Reply to This ]



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