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    Author: takenspiritwind
    ASL Info:    21/F/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 117/95/38
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 587
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 781



    Description:
       My heart broken and once removed now exposed-I hope that anyone who reads that line gets what im talikng about. I would also want lots of help wit this poem...It's old and needs help!


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    My sacrifices great, my power deep
    my soul exposed for all to see.
    Darkness settles deep within my blackened heart.
    So profound a language I do not understand.
    My heart broken and once removed now exposed.
    A deep passion for exception, and passage into the world.
    I lay down my life for others to tread upon.
    Taking what they want and giving nothing in return .
    My life but a wash of precious air.
    The world an evil for all too see and pass judgement.
    So dark and evil this hidden world; it is not for mortal eyes to pass upon.
    To morbid and dilapitated this disgusting life I live, and so thrown away.
    Down and down I fall, falling beow societies high graces.




    Submitted on 2006-09-15 08:58:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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