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    dots Submission Name: A Song to my Motherdots

    Author: Triple E
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This poem is writen from the point of view of an unborn child whose mother is considering abortion

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    dotsA Song to my Motherdots

    I may never see the sunshine,
    I may never feel the rain.
    I may never know the joy of love
    Or weep with heart-felt pain.
    You see I'm just a problem ,
    And my mother cannot cope.
    But someone said Abortion,
    And now she has some hope.
    Oh mother, please believe me,
    I don't want to cause you grief
    But pleas don't think that killing me
    Will bring you quick relief.
    What about the days ahead
    When you look back on this time
    Will you ever stop and wonder
    On this life that once was mine?
    Oh mother please believe me
    I am more than just a "blob"
    I am a tiny person,
    My life,oh please don't rob

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