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    dots Submission Name: Dancedots
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    Author: lynn marsters
    ASL Info:    20/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49/61/32
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1027
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1002



    Description:
       I basically just took the lyrics to lord of the dance and cut and pasted and cut and pasted and deleted and edited and I actually really like it if you read it carefully


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    dotsDancedots
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    DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE
    I
    I am the lord of the dance said he and I shall lead you all in the dance said her come come where DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE
    I am the lord of the dance in the dance said her come come wherever you may be for I am the lord of the dance said he and I shall lead you all in the dance DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE
    I am the lord of the dance said he and I shall lead said he and I shall lead you all in the DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE
    I am the lord of the dance said he and I shall lead you all in the dance said her come come wherever you may be for I said he and I shall lead you all in the DANCE DANCE DANCE DANCE
    I am the lord of the dance said he and I shall lead you all in the dance said her come come shall lead you all in the dance said he
    said he
    said he
    he for I am the lord of the dance said he and I shall lead you all in the dance said he
    the lord of the dance said you all in the dance said he




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    ||| Comments |||
      hmm... a bit weird but i see why you like it acctually.
    a little too repetitive for me but it gives something.
    hard to say annything about this really
    | Posted on 2007-10-17 00:00:00 | by Wolfie | [ Reply to This ]
      Umm...what did you do, copy and paste a sentence fifty times?
    | Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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