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    dots Submission Name: Artichokesdots
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    Author: mandyshay07
    ASL Info:    17/f/kentucky yall!
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 119/121/32
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 399
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 573



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       ok..the title is completely irrelevant to the poem, but I couldn't think of one and i was just thinking about them so that became the title..maybe I'll write about it hmm


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    dotsArtichokesdots
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    Questions without answers,
    ryhme lacking reason,
    symbolic words,
    expression of feeling.

    Images racing in our mind,
    flowing down through the pen.
    We begin to paint a picture
    with words as we write.

    Beauty, grace, and splendor
    all combine to form a song,
    language flowing with emotion,
    a beautiful pattern without rhyme.

    No riches ever bestowed on man
    could ever match the joy
    of expressing thought through a poem
    and witnessing it's birth.




    Submitted on 2004-05-22 21:48:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well, in response to wonderpassing's comment, the poem im talking about doesnt have a rhyme scheme. i think you were confused because the 2nd and 12th lines seem to say two different things. i was wondering if that would confuse anyone. i was trying to say that the poem starts out trying to rhyme, but it doesnt make any sense and then it ends up not ryhming...if anyone has any suggestions on how to get that across clearer please run them by me.
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by mandyshay07 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is a great poem, very few people can write things so well, this is beautiful and graceful. its simple yet passionate, great write
    | Posted on 2004-05-22 00:00:00 | by JGo | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good. I enjoyed how you expressed yourself through a poem the way you feel when you write a poem. I'm sure plenty of people can relate. The one thing I am slightly confused about is whether or not you had a rhyme scheme involved, and if not, where does artichokes come from? Finally, in your second line in the 1st stanza, you have your 'h' and 'y' mixed up in rhyme. Nice job though.
    | Posted on 2004-05-22 00:00:00 | by Wonder Passing | [ Reply to This ]



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