Hmm...sounds like random thoughts erupting into words that mean something.
Delicately torn through tissue and chambers, signify that your slow being torn like tissue, fragie.
Feeble fingers work thin thread to save our eclipse, means that the thread of life is being spun, only finding that eventually it falls into darkness.
Thoughtless journeys,forever after, means floating endlessly, for eternity, not alive nor are you dead. Passion has lost its persistence, things that once brought forth emotions no longer mean a thing.
Simply there for beings who float and become lost.
Well, just an odd opinion. Nice, it makes you think.
Submission Name: Passion Lost Persistence
