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    dots Submission Name: Self Pity--dots
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    Author: Gothic Misery
    ASL Info:    25/F/NV
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 90/39/32
    Words: 411
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSelf Pity--dots
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    This one single poem is not enough-
    I could write about you for the rest of my life
    and I suppose I will
    I don't understand how I cannot control my own feelings
    If I'm not in control than who is?
    I've carried you with me for what feels like eternity
    It's so hard for me to trust and love anyone else
    There's no room- you have everything of me
    Why am I alone-why aren't you here with me?
    I wonder if you're suffering too
    I can hear your words but I can not feel your pain
    And it hurts me, everyday
    I want so much of you, as if you never gave me enough
    You never eased my pain
    You tell me you love me and that there's no one that you'll ever love more
    If I love you so much then why don't I believe you?
    I believe we'll never be together
    Maybe because I wont let my self
    I'm hurting inside and the only thing I tell myself that will heal that pain- is you
    But that's not true, is it?
    I wish I had no feelings and there was no such thing as confusion
    If no one in the world ever loved someone
    would that honestly be that bad?
    I've lied for you, sacraficed for you, I'd kill myself for you
    But for what?
    There's an emptiness inside and I have nothing left
    I've felt enough pain for my time and I can't seem to numb you from my conscience
    Days go by and some are better than others
    But then I think of you, not knowing...like a sharp knife in my back
    And I break down again
    Except now I've learned to keep my tears inside
    Tears show that my soul's bleeding
    And I can't let you win
    I'm alone and no one understands
    My mind is a complete mess, a spiral of my own insanity
    When will this go away?
    I imagine your hand reaching out to me and I want to hold it and kiss it
    But I can't, it's too far out to touch
    I hold my head down as if I'm being punished for loving someone
    Never looking up to let the sunshine warm and heal me
    I guess I have to hurt, I have to keep you somehow with me
    And if hurting is the only way, than I'm in my own prison
    Eventhough the door is so wide open




    Submitted on 2006-09-16 00:21:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh!~ can say how much i feel you have looked
    into the hearts of the deep hearted and the
    lost loved~u moved me as if you read my mind
    contol the doors of my soul ~ and past on your
    words of the real~
    | Posted on 2006-09-16 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ]


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