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    dots Submission Name: At It Again!dots
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    Author: young p
    ASL Info:    14/m/N.O.La
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 29/31/11
    Words: 356
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1078
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2145



    Description:
       me and troy at it again. just like the title says


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    dotsAt It Again!dots
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    (young p)
    Fame is the hall Iím walking
    Itís like you on mute when youíre talking
    Cuz I donít hear the shit young birds be squawking
    All you hear is guns like fireworks sparking
    From your 8th story apartment
    You niggas stink, stop farting
    My rhymes so precious I need an auction
    I bite hoes on the neck, I guess I sleep in a coffin

    (unknown soldier)
    Ha Iím so sick itís like Iím constantly coughing
    Beating whack rappers too often
    Soften their hard facades as I cause my mind to sharpen
    Rip em a new one so they could blow shit out their holes like a dolphin
    Lol, hah u got me chuckling and shit
    I bust at fake niggas with mental guns and some clips
    Got your broad sucking my dick
    My dick drops till I rest my nuts on her tits
    And the only time me and Bow Wow ďRoll BounceĒ is when Iím fucking his bitch
    UGH!!!

    (young p)
    I ride in a whip known as a porche
    Eat dead rappers like a volture
    Stand taller than a sculpture
    ALL ABORD!!!
    Iím ready for departure
    I spit hot so I can scorch ya
    With the toasta
    Got you pulling the white flag in
    Shit so long got the polo dragging
    Scarier than a komodo dragon
    Your girl wants that dick stabbing in
    Leave her staggering

    (unknown soldier)
    Man these ďemceesĒ be bragging and acting
    But when it comes to this rapping their mouths are closed like a caption
    Faker than a war hero whoís never seen action
    But I can make these cats bleed even redder than factions
    If you divide your life in half it makes one hell of a fraction
    So you search for that portion before another subtraction
    I give birth to a new sound without having contractions
    All I need is a dream and I can keep passionately rapping
    These fagots are born as maggots who happenÖ
    ÖTo be the shit I wiped outta my ass with a napkin
    Yo, in the sunís glory Iím basking
    On an all soul diet, mutha fuckas Iím fasting




    Submitted on 2006-09-16 00:48:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i know i read this before lol. But this was tight...and hahaha that person said it's not poetry lol. ppl are funny

    Lady D
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry, this is not poetry.
    | Posted on 2006-09-16 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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