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I Cry

Author: Black-Death
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I Cry

i cry every night before i sleep.. i cry every day before i wake... i cry every time i think of your face... i love you so much ... i whant to hold you i take other things to replace that one thing we had. That you let go That you abused... i cry every time i think of you

Submitted on 2006-09-16 00:53:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ummm.. i cry too sometimes... and alot of people but its ok
hold on

and eat a lot of choclate

lol :)
| Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]

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