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Dream...


Author: Black-Death
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Class/Type: Misc /You left me
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Dream...



As i hold you in my arms my perfect love.. as i kiss your sweet lips... as i smell your sweet cent... i wake up crying... because of the thought of being with you... is dead now...




Submitted on 2006-09-16 00:54:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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