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    dots Submission Name: Ask yourself.....againdots

    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsAsk yourself.....againdots

    Ok imagine this
    Everytime you wake up
    You turn to the left still smiling about last night
    And that one person who makes your life complete
    Is wrapped around in your arms
    With that cute look on her face that you fell in love with
    Still as amazing as ever
    Still half asleep but fully aware where she is
    And she keeps on smiling and kisses you just once before you even say goodmorning
    And you love that feeling of complete love when your around them
    And you know you want this one person in your life.......
    Ok now this is the question
    Can you ever leave that?
    Would you get rid of everything that you hold so dear to you
    So you can have all the material wealth a human can ever want
    With the big masion,giant chandelier outside your door,big screen t.v and all the other fixings and with all that the fame you would normal die for
    For all that would you really give that person who made all that useless , would you give her up.......Is this a hard question for you to answer?

    Submitted on 2006-09-16 13:11:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i would choose love because you can liut out money but love makes the world complete..
    or atleast thats my theory
    xXx stacey
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      No way. I wouldn't give that person up for anything in the world. No question to it. Why would anyone give up what means the most for material possestions. If you ask me it would be a rather dumb thing to do. Good write, and good question. Your imaging in the begging was great.

    | Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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