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Road 2 Recovery


Author: Hip-Hop Honey
ASL Info:    16/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105 /86 /31
Words: 136
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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This poem is about the bad things I got into and saw this summer Reading this might change the way you look at me I guess in ways but to me this poem reflects my most inner feelings about what I did but I hope you enjoy reading this well try to anyways..Bye


Road 2 Recovery



Cocaine inforce in your brain
3 seconds of numbness and
Years of heartbreaking pains
People don't realize what they say
Just run around crazy all day
A life I will admitt I was caught up in
Until I saw first hand the trouble I was in
Tears on her face as I said goodbye
While at the saem time I was drying my eyes
But I've been doing somewhat well for myself
I have less doubt in a world
I turned right side out
Where to go from here I wonder where
Sitting in a room filled with people who care
So enough is enough
Need to get on track
Be the girl I used to be
Do the things I'd always dreamed
But first I must battle with
The road to recovery




Submitted on 2006-09-16 15:20:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Good flow and rhyme. Everyone goes through hard times, but some don't always make it back. I'm glad you're not one of those people. The last line is perfect and ties the whole poem together. Great job.
Katana
| Posted on 2007-07-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]


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