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    dots Submission Name: Road 2 Recoverydots
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    Author: Hip-Hop Honey
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105/86/31
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 687
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    Description:
       This poem is about the bad things I got into and saw this summer Reading this might change the way you look at me I guess in ways but to me this poem reflects my most inner feelings about what I did but I hope you enjoy reading this well try to anyways..Bye


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    dotsRoad 2 Recoverydots
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    Cocaine inforce in your brain
    3 seconds of numbness and
    Years of heartbreaking pains
    People don't realize what they say
    Just run around crazy all day
    A life I will admitt I was caught up in
    Until I saw first hand the trouble I was in
    Tears on her face as I said goodbye
    While at the saem time I was drying my eyes
    But I've been doing somewhat well for myself
    I have less doubt in a world
    I turned right side out
    Where to go from here I wonder where
    Sitting in a room filled with people who care
    So enough is enough
    Need to get on track
    Be the girl I used to be
    Do the things I'd always dreamed
    But first I must battle with
    The road to recovery




    Submitted on 2006-09-16 15:20:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good flow and rhyme. Everyone goes through hard times, but some don't always make it back. I'm glad you're not one of those people. The last line is perfect and ties the whole poem together. Great job.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2007-07-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]


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