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    dots Submission Name: Hollowdots
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    Author: Castalia
    ASL Info:    666/N/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 16/33/33
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1006



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       I'm not sure what it is about...


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    dotsHollowdots
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    Leave my body somewhere else...
    I want to die, to leave this Earth behind.
    See the world around me
    Pass me by, as I fly only in mind.

    Shine with stars,
    Speak with winds,
    Chat with clouds,
    Sing and dance in space.

    Nevermind our hipocrisy,
    love or sadness, even politics.
    Hello nothing, empty philosofy,
    Careless dream.

    Without matter,
    Everything is so light.
    No more clutter,
    It's so clever, such delight.

    I'm traveling through time,
    With sweet embrace of unknown.
    Only imagination's knights,
    No kings with hovering thrones.



    Suddenly,

    rays of light warm me.

    It's done, all over now.

    I've returned, to this darkness.

    The silent noise of a nightmare.

    A space filled with everything,

    And everyone.




    Submitted on 2006-09-16 15:24:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Again. Very good. Creative idea, that pinch of darkness and excellent vocabulary.
    | Posted on 2006-11-12 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]



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