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    dots Submission Name: "I Love You"dots
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    Author: KBail
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 160
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 761



    Description:
       A poem about a girl and a boy who sneak out too meet each other for the first time. It is love at first sight but in the end, they must go their seperate ways.


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    dots"I Love You"dots
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    Looking up at the night sky,
    He said "I love you" one more time.
    She looked at him once again,
    But this time,
    A promise in her eye kept his heart from breaking, without a sigh.

    As they walked further and further into the night
    Her mind was cleared of all the fright.
    The waves sound a constant murmur
    Her eyes stare at him in a deep fervor.

    The night grew cold,
    Her curfew had passed.
    They got in her car,
    She pressed on the gas.

    They got to his house
    And had their last kiss
    Then she looked at him with a glance of bliss.
    She told him I love you once more
    In hopes that his lips were not in a lour.




    Submitted on 2006-09-16 16:31:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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